Your submitted evaluation:
I'd love to see this staged! It will be necessary to have actors that can handle the fast paced dialogue called for in places and who can convey the necessary emotions under the surface.. It was a very enjoyable read.
One question - on page 77, near the top, Carl has a line "We're doing their best." I was confused by this. Should it be "They're doing their best" or "We're doing our best"?
Your rating: 2
Evaluation submitted: 2024-06-19 15:48:47
